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Monday, 3 April 2017

Omaru Creek poem

Walt: write a poem

Lakai is a electrifying eel with razor sharp teeth

Lakai is the flowing water with the sun shining on the surface

Lakai is the hard rocks with aquatic weeds surrounding it

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Konnichiwa Lakai,

I love your metaphors based on the Omaru Creek. I too made 3 metaphors and posted it on my blog. I did not use anything with eels yet I think my metaphors are well on it's own. Out of all your metaphors, which one do you find the most unique?

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