Walht: write an interesting and enjoyable narrative.
It is a bright day in China, Jake’s dad, Peter was a scientist who would do experiments on human beings. One day Jake went to tell his dad if he is coming to the fundraiser or not, he didn't know where he was so he went to his lab to see if he was there. As soon as he went inside the lab Peter was standing behind the machine,and the son was standing in the way of the apple. The machine was on max and Zap! Went the machine. Jake said “I feel funny” then suddenly up up up he went into the clouds, he turned into a giant. Peter didn’t know what to do but luckily there was an antidote to cure him.
While Peter was looking for the antidote Jake was wondering off in this bad weather,he went to go to the park and play with his friends but he was too big to play soccer. His friends were in shock Peter was looking for the antidote so he could cure him, then he will turn back to normal.
Jake was so scared he didn’t know what to do instead he jumped and climbed over houses to see if the fundraiser was still going fine without them but then, back at the lab Peter was busy like a bee trying to make the antidote to cure his son, Jake went back to the lab he slammed into a tall tree so he went back to the park, Peter tried to turn the apple into a giant one and then he used the antidote on the apple and it turned back to normal size.
Peter yelled out to his son Jake, Jake ran back to the lab “drink this” said Peter it will help you get back to normal size Jake couldn’t wait to get back to normal size he was excited Jake drank it and he was splendid his friends were surprised he was so glad and they quickly drifted off to the fundraiser luckily it was still okay, almost everyone in the fundraiser asked where were you Peter replied you wouldn't want to know.
1 comments:
Talofa lava Lakai
I like how you said "Peter was busy like a bee." I really enjoyed reading your story. I also wrote my story and it is completely different from yours. Did you enjoy writing about this topic?
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